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Re: Blithe Bereavement - CH 1
Whoa... I must say now that you are fantastic writer. The voice that this story possesses reeks years of reading and writing. Just lovely and a quite bit refreshing. The ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: I Love You
Bravissimo!! This was beautiful and wonderful and magnificent and just plain old catchy. I like how you explained your love but you didn't exactly say the words. I love that ...
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: Blithe Bereavement - Prologue
Hello, don't think I've seen you 'round these parts before. Welcome to YWS!! *tumbleweed floats across the ground* Okay well anyways, I liked this! Its bordering on the been done ...
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: All is Dead at the Thirteenth Hour #1
Wow! A collaboration! I have not read anything of Bitter's in a while but you two are a perfect mix of sugar and spice. At first it seems like the ...
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: Just Listen
This was just floating along and I just decided to take a look-see. Here we go!! Okay, to be honest, I couldn't go on. Your sentences are strong, almost poetic ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {six}
Ha! Kylan you won't believe what I had to go through to read this! Well to make a long story short, I wasn't home yesterday and so something told me ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Remember the time?
Well I haven't seen you around here, so you must be new. Welcome to YWS I must say that this is a wonderful piece and I have never seen a ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {five}
Hey Ky, Well I didn't know you posted a part five! Ok I'm here now. This was an amazing chapter and really, you're so awesome that this doesn't really need ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {four}
Thanks for letting me know that the next part was posted Kylan!! Wow!! Words can't even describe how great this is. I mean they should make your writing apart of ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {three}
I really didn't mean to wait so long to read the rest of this but I finished reading this and I loved it!! Charlie doesn't cease to amaze me, he's ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
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Hello, Welcome to YWS!! First I must say that you write exceptionally well for your age. You made me see things that went far beyond John's life and then more. ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Orb of Confucius (1)
Hey Sam!!! I love Shuqaio and Akshay together. They fit like two mix-matched socks in a sea full of matches. Perfect! He’d played with her bracelet and absentmindedly muttered something ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Apparition
Hows it been, BBB? I am so glad I read this today! This was another fine installment to the Seance series. I just loved the twist at the end. I ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {two}
Hello Again!! My, this installment was even better than the first. I could almost taste the carnival and the smells and the screams of the people. The way you described ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {one}
Hey Kylan!!! I'm so sorry that I didn't read this earlier but I've been really busy...but I'm here now! I loved this, as always Kylan. You wrap everything that you're ...
Sep 2, 2008
